Paper 3 Question 1

 



Paper 3 Question 1

Text A is a collection of letters from an uncle to his nephew advising him upon his first going to Oxford, Edward Berens had written this in 1832, which means that this excerpt is from the “Late Modern English” period. Throughout a substantial amount of years, our English language has changed an intense amount, up until now we use it currently. The linguist Micheal Halliday believed that the language change was based on the willingness and needs of the users. Over time technology has become more prevalent than ever before. This new way of communication has prompted changes in our language, the extracts distribute how our language has been changed. With the development of technology in emails and texts, the users of language have altered meanings and coding of words, in which almost exiles letters. 

Text A demonstrates a severe amount of change in grammar and syntax. Berens transfers tenses with the usage of his pronouns from: “you”, too, “he” and “him”, this change so easily relates back to Halliday's functional theory because as changes in society prompt the formality, users found it more understandable to not hop between tenses so frequently and unclearly. As the ‘uncle” gives advice he is presenting hypotheticals, but as language changes so do the formality. As does the intense usage of comas, creating no natural pauses and running on sentences. This shows that language from back then until today, users have found new ways to communicate in a more efficient manner.

Text B, a collate chart that shows synonyms for “taste” and “judgment”, also shows the semantic change over time. According to the chart, the word “judgment” was used alongside words such as; “dissenting”, “clinical”, and “professional” from the 1980s to 1933. This is from the “Present Day English” stage, meaning that it is after the 1800s. It is clear that the word “judgment” was a word that was strictly related to knowledge. However, the word “taste” has a more intimate touch in the connotations such as “good”, “personal” and “bad.” This means that the word has gone through broadening when the meaning of a word becomes more inclusive than its early meaning. This is supported by Text A, where Edward Berens states, “..violation of good taste and correct judgment.” Here we are exposed to both of the words, it is clear that Berens is using ‘taste’ more broadly by staying in its emotional and personal elements. While “judgment” is narrowed, as it only expresses the meaning of knowledge. As we see the words that they are paired with being personal and impersonal.

Text C, an n-gram which reveals and illustrates the changes in usage of how a common phrase, “is abt to be”, as shown in the n-gram, it is obvious that in the ‘Early Modern English’ years was the most frequently utilized way of saying the phrase. Meanwhile, once you fast forward to ‘Present Day English’ the translation of the phrase is now used as, “tend to be” the highrise of this change is exponential. Highlighting the previously stated theory by Micheal Halliday in which he believed that the language change was based on the willingness and needs of the users. Focusing on the specific word in the phrase, ‘abt’, is an obsolete word which is a word that is no longer used nor understood as shown by the n-graph. The graph zooms in on a phrase barely touching the 0% mark of its usage, coming to the 2000 era versus its peak in the 1800s. In fact, the phrase “tend to be” became even more popular than “are abt to be” as we hit “Present-Day English.” This ties into Chen’s ‘S-curve model’ theory in which change starts in a limited way and then accelerates more as the speakers and users adapt to the change. The broadening of the word ‘tend’ also advanced the uplift of the phrase, getting rid of the before-used phrase.


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  1. Hi.

    On the AO2 scale, I would award you with 4 marks. There were a few minor errors I found in some sentences where they do not flow easily, but it wasn't severe. I found all of your content to be relevant so well done on that.

    On the AO4 scale, I would award you with 4 marks. You did a very nice job of relating the texts to theories and explaining the theories themselves. Also, your use of other knowledge really adds to the formality of it and shows you know what you're talking about.

    On the AO5 scale, I would award you with 9 marks. I believe that the main reason for this is that I couldn't see clear synthesis between the sources. Your text was very organized in keeping them all separate, I think for the next time try and add some in between paragraphs that bring more than one of the texts together. This would really bring your score up a lot. Overall though, good job!

    This leaves you with a total of 17 marks! Very good job!!

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  2. Dear Charli
    Your writing was very neat and had lots of content. No errors and it all flowed nicely, for the most part. Either, in some places word choice could have been a little better or it didn’t flow as nicely. As for understanding, I could tell from your writing that it was clear that you knew your stuff, like how you quote from text a, talked about the s-curve model, and the theory that you connected to text A. You even linked the table from text B to text A.
    For content the first thing I noticed was how you overlapped the texts. Instead of giving each text their own paragraph you merged them and that gave you more content to write about. Also doing that shows that you know what the prompt is asking. It shows that even though they are separate pieces of info, they overlap in the real world and how they affect each other.
    Overall score - 19
    Great Job!

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